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Dave's avatar

Very nice start to this story. You knew it would get hot because it is set in Dubai. But nothing could prepare the reader for Nathan's work on Jack. 🔥 Ropes going untouched down Nathan's throat. Jack reduced to a panting mess. And is the phone getting cloned already? You know Jack will reciprocate but what will he do to get Nathan to give up all of his secrets. Will he get to drive the Mustang?

Can't wait for the next installment. 😊

Mark Dean's avatar

Hot start. The flight. Soaring in the ether, exploding and imploding at the same time.

R. Adrian Thorne ⏾⋆.˚'s avatar

And it’s only going to get better.

David's avatar

Nicely written!

Steve Rentschler's avatar

💥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥